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Imaginary Friends, April 12th, 2009, 7:49 am


So, that´s how a page looks when I have no school and can stay up way too late, hehe. I think I draw best at night XD

Maybe a little fanservice will follow later but I´m not sure yet.
Oh, and please tell if my translation is wrong. I really had no clue how I should translate the last panel )=

What do you think will Guilaume get tattooed? And where? Maybe he´ll just sneak away while Fili is occupied with drooling ;)




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Akunen, April 12th, 2009, 9:34 am


Translation looks good to me. Granted, my grammar ain't the best either. xD

Page looks good though ^^ Excited for the next.


AutumnEstuary (Guest), April 18th, 2009, 7:32 pm


commenting late, but I'm always ready to edit. :D

the "well...how shall I put it?" is good, but the second sentence is a bit awkward. I'm assuming you intended for him to sound, uhm, overly proper, so "you're drooling." would probably be too blunt for what you want to convey here, so perhaps "Your salvia production seems to have increased dramatically" which is really stiff, but is more grammatically correct than what you have here (the "you've got increased" is weird). Even simply adding "seems" in there somewhere would make it work better (e.g. "You seem to have increased saliva production" or somesuch thing.)

(also, I really like the coloring on this page- your digital work is increasing in finesse dramatically! ^^)


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